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Autumn Within, Nov 10, 2026

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It is autumn; not without
But within me is the cold.
Youth and spring are all about;
It is I that have grown old.

Birds are darting through the air,
Singing, building without rest;
Life is stirring everywhere,
Save within my lonely breast.

There is silence: the dead leaves
Fall and rustle and are still;
Beats no flail upon the sheaves,
Comes no murmur from the mill.

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📖 About this poem

Longfellow flips the season inside out here: autumn isn't the weather, it's the weather of the self. Outside, everything insists on youth — birds darting and singing, building nests without rest — while the speaker admits, almost startled by the admission, that the cold has settled in him alone. The poem works through contrast, stanza by stanza: spring's noise against his silence, the world's labor against his stillness. Notice how the final image turns unexpectedly quiet — no flail beating the sheaves, no murmur from the mill — sounds of harvest work that have simply stopped, as if even productivity has gone dormant with him. It's a small, controlled poem, four tight quatrains, but it captures something very ordinary and very human: the private weather we carry regardless of what the calendar or the birds outside are doing. That gap between inner and outer season is why it still resonates.